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Above is our Final Cut of the Hit List



Above is our initial rough cut of the Hit List

Here is our feedback from our rough cut:
A lot of good constructive criticism has been given and also a couple of compliments. A lot of people said that we used a good set of camera angles, we feel we used some but not as good as we could have so when we go to shoot the next part we will be using more. Someone also said the scene wasn't "scary" or didn't fit the convention, we also agree because the next scene is the part that fits this but we know that this should have happened all the way through. We were advised by someone to use Live Type for our titles to improve them. Others said the titles were good I am happy with the titles and think they are very good at linking in with the horror genre, they particularly liked the production logo which was cleverly created by one of our group members using Photoshop. Also people have commented on the good use of sound we have on our opening sequence, for example when the character shuts the door we have used a door sound effect which also sounds creepy. At one point in the opening sequence the camera focus goes blurred we used this to try to hide the identity of the boy and gives an unsettled feel to the scene. People commented on this but it was put there for a reason although i understand why people have spoken about this.



Above is our Preliminary task